Recent Question/Assignment

Please quote me to do a grammar check and critique content. I have attached a revised draft of my dissertation.
-I still need to cite and format the document tomorrow (Monday) prior to Wednesday's submission and so any blue or yellow highlight will be completed tomorrow and is just inserting references etc.
-There are a small few parts still purple highlighted which I just need to go over and finish tonight or tomorrow. Editing the document has just taken longer than expected so I have a little more to do. Some of these are subject to questions I have for my dissertation tutor, whom I am meeting tomorrow (on Monday).
I hope this is alright, but any questions let me know.